10 Things Fantasy Readers Hate (Writing Advice)

Jed Herne March 13, 2024
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Jed Herne

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Helping you write better fantasy books 🧙 On this channel, I share the best fantasy writing advice that I've learned from publishing four novels and a video game. My books include Kingdom of Dragons, The Thunder Heist, Across the Broken Stars, and Fires of the Dead. I also wrote Siege of Treboulain (an interactive fantasy novel published by Choice of Games). Through my classes and programs, I've worked with 200+ fantasy writers to help them improve their stories. This has given me a lot of insight into the most common struggles that new fantasy writers face. I run this channel to share my learnings. Want to join my accountability and support community for fantasy writers? Then click the first link down below 👇

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I asked 348 fantasy readers about their least favourite story elements. Watch this next: https://youtu.be/_E-IAa3g604?si=QmYSRi9DKR_NYYFU Apply for my Fantasy Outlining Bootcamp: https://jedherne.com/outline ⏲️ TIMESTAMPS: 00:00 – Intro 00:32 – Modern language & anachronistic terms 02:14 – Slow pacing and filler content 05:02 – Forced humour 07:56 – Shallow magic systems 11:42 – Miscommunication as conflict 13:24 – Info-dumps 15:41 – Poor character development 18:47 – Gratuitous sex and violence 21:01 – Poorly executed tropes 25:04 – Forced romance ✏️ MY FREE WRITING ADVICE BOOK: Get my free book: '5 Lessons That Transformed My Writing': https://jedherne.com/lessons 🚀 BUILD BETTER WRITING HABITS: Join my Easy Writing Habits course: https://easywritinghabits.com/ 📙 MY BOOKS: Across the Broken Stars: https://jedherne.com/acrossthebrokenstars The Thunder Heist: https://jedherne.com/thethunderheist/ Fires of the Dead: https://jedherne.com/firesofthedead Kingdom of Dragons: https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/jedherne/kingdom-of-dragons 🎮 MY VIDEO GAME: Siege of Treboulain: https://jedherne.com/siege-of-treboulain-details/ Video edited by @the_fools_tale

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