Dialogue Mistakes New Writers Make ❌ Avoid These Cringeworthy Cliches!!

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Get instant access to the live training replay here: 👉 http://www.learnfromabbie.com/p/live-trainings-signup Are you struggling to make your dialogue feel realistic and emotional? Do you find your characters saying exactly what they're feeling, which makes the dialogue flat and dry and predictable? Do feel like all your characters sound the same, lacking distinct voices and personalities? If so, today's video is for you. We’re going to explore the DO’s and DON’Ts of writing dialogue—cringeworthy mistakes that many writers make and how to avoid these pitfalls so that your dialogue will feel fresh, engaging, and truly dynamite! Comment below and tell me: What is your favorite example of well-written dialogue? ________________________________ ✨ T I M E S T A M P S ✨ 00:00 What's the secret to good dialogue? 01:52 DON'T make your characters say exactly what they're feeling 04:15 Bad example (dialogue with conflict dumping) 05:36 DO use subtext to show your characters' emotions 07:05 Good example (dialogue with subtext) 09:02 DON'T make all your characters sound the same 10:14 DO give your characters distinct voices 10:40 Come to my live training! (link in description) 12:41 DON'T overuse description in dialogue tags 13:53 Bad example (dialogue tags) 16:40 DO keep your dialogue fast-paced and to the point 17:14 Good example (dialogue tags) 19:12 Want to take your dialogue to the next level? 20:11 Subscribe for more writing videos :) ________________________________ Subscribe for weekly episodes of #WritersLifeWednesdays! Make Your Story Matter™ and make your author dreams come true… new videos every Wednesday. ✨ V A L U A B L E R E S O U R C E S✨ ❤️GET BONUS CONTENT + SUPPORT THIS CHANNEL: https://www.patreon.com/abbieemmons 📚READ MY DEBUT NOVEL, 100 DAYS OF SUNLIGHT: https://amzn.to/2Et7fhS 🖥️TAKE MY SCRIVENER MASTERCLASS: https://makeyourstorymatter.teachable.com/p/teachmescrivener ✏️TAKE MY MASTERCLASS ON EDITING: https://www.learnfromabbie.com/p/edit-your-book-like-a-pro 💬TAKE MY BOOK BLURB MASTERCLASS: https://www.learnfromabbie.com/p/how-to-craft-a-bestseller-book-blurb 📓GET MY FREE WRITING TEMPLATES: https://abbieemmons.ck.page/make-your-story-matter 💵GET 20% OFF SCRIVENER - USE CODE "ABBIE" → https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener-affiliate.html?fpr=abbie26 🎤LISTEN TO MY PODCAST WITH MY SISTER: https://anchor.fm/kate-and-abbie-show 🎥 MY GEAR + WRITING TOOLS: https://abbieemmonsauthor.com/my-gear 🎵 I GET ALL MY MUSIC FROM EPIDEMIC SOUND… CLAIM YOUR 60-DAY FREE TRIAL HERE: https://www.epidemicsound.com/referral/v02bl3/ MORE VIDEOS YOU WOULD LIKE: → WHAT TO WRITE ABOUT WHEN YOU’RE BORED https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A_3PL1a4K7E&t=809s → THE ULTIMATE CHARACTER PROFILE https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1W5DSOlPrw&t=198s → HOW TO STAY MOTIVATED TO WRITE YOUR NOVEL https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=szVP7y38Rc4 → MY CHAPTER-BY-CHAPTER OUTLINING METHOD https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KqTnmNjkaec&t=434s ✨F O L L O W ✨ blog: https://bit.ly/2Kl21m8 facebook: https://bit.ly/2FS2Ikh instagram: http://bit.ly/2Xr5hUI tiktok: https://www.tiktok.com/@makeyourstorymatter patreon: https://www.patreon.com/abbieemmons Business inquiries: [email protected] ✨ A B O U T ✨ My name is Abbie Emmons I teach writers how to make their stories matter by harnessing the power and psychology of storytelling, transforming their ideas into a masterpiece, and creating a lifestyle that makes their author dreams come true. Story isn’t about “what happens” — it’s about how what happens affects and transforms the characters. I believe that there is an exact science (a recipe, if you will) behind a perfect story. And if you know what ingredients you need, you can create your own perfect story with ease and confidence. That’s what we talk about every week on this channel – and if it’s something you’re into, be sure to subscribe and join this community!